Trying to Copy Artists' Eyes

I failed.
Check out the artists I tried to Reference:
SpoiledCitrus:   / spoiledcitrus  
Tuliblu:   / tuliblu  
Buruchii:   / buruchii  
Seikatattoo:   / seikatattoo  

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♕OTHER SOCIALS:
Twitter:   / leslielumarie  
Instagram:   / leslielumarie  
DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/leslieelum...
Tumblr:   / leslielumarie  

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♕MUSIC USED:
Do Do Do by Silent Partner
Mister Lady by Freedome Trail Studio
Subway Dreams by Dan Henig
Flames by Dan Henig
End Card Music by 556pm:
   / @556pm7  
  / 556pm  

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♕TOOLS I USE:
Art Program: Clip Studio Paint
Tablet: Wacom MobileStudio Pro 16”
Screen Recording: OBS
Camera: Canon Powershot G7 Mark II
Microphone: Blue Yeti
Video Editor: Adobe Premiere Pro