Immortal Dark is torture to read: The book NO ONE could finish
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Загружено: 2024-10-09
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0:00 Intro
2:28 Spoiler-free Summary
5:05 Spoiler warning and TW
5:45 World Building
12:09 Dranoctie Studies
18:43 Adane House
20:37 Susenyos Saget
25:45 The House Law
28:53 The Poison Plot
32:42 The Nefrassi and June
37:43 What Went Wrong
Immortal Dark by Tigest Girma promised a fun and unique dark fantasy featuring black vampires and morally gray characters. And while this was accomplished to some degree, many readers couldn’t even get far enough to find out.
This book is long even for an avid reader like myself. And while someone else might enjoy this much dense content, I felt that this book needed a goode round of cuts. From plots that never go anywhere to dull study scenes, this book is muddled with filler and doesn’t have a clear story arc.
This video only contains SOME of my major critiques for this book which can be summed up as: cut the book in HALF.
No hate to this author at all. I know she is a debut author and she can only go up from here. She is already seeing so much success and I’m truly happy for that and all my critiques are coming from a good place.
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