9 Spicy Scene Mistakes that Readers Will Never Forgive

My Video on good ways to write steamy scenes:
   • 9 Steamy Scene Techniques that Separate Am...  

And if you're more of a fade-to-black writer, then maybe this video isn't for you. For all other writers, this video helps you write the spicy scenes in your novel.

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Here is the line in Smilla's Sense of Snow I didn't want to mention in the video:
“I induce him to open the little slit in the head of his p**** so I can put my c******* inside and f*** him.” Like I said, impossible biology.

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Timeline:
0:00 Intro
0:21 Thesaurus Abuse
1:46 Similes, Attack
3:33 Impossible Biology
4:59 God-Awful Dialogue
6:22 Unsexy Sexy Scenes
7:38 Believing it Has to be Erotic
9:07 Diving into the Less Elegant Realities
10:08 Forgetting About Anticipation
11:21 The Rise of Frankenstein Writing