12 Plot Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make

After working with 200+ writers, here are the biggest plot mistakes I see.
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⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:

00:00 – Introduction
00:32 – Using coincidences instead of consequences
02:20 – Writing from the start
05:01 – Not knowing how to flow between scenes
09:10 – Good vs evil choices
10:38 – Overusing cliffhangers
12:16 – Bad subplots
15:38 – Not knowing what to do in the middle
28:34 – Doing one thing in each scene
29:53 – Not enough signs of progress
31:13 – Lack of space between setup and payoff
33:19 – False tension
35:37 – Weak antagonists

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