7 Cringey MISTAKES Writers Make with MALE Characters

There are SEVEN cringeworthy mistakes that writers (particularly female writers) make when writing fictional men, and readers everywhere are sick and tired of seeing these clichés! In this video, I'm revealing what these mistakes are and how you can fix them to make your male characters more authentic, relatable, and true to life. So if you’re ready to level up your male characters, keep watching. This video might just save your book from being ROASTED with one-star reviews.

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✨ C H A P T E R S ✨
00:00 Male character mistakes that make me CRINGE
00:47 Mistake 1: over-describing his physical appearance
02:05 Mistake 2: making him too introspective
03:19 Mistake 3: smirking and acting seductive
05:04 Ready to LEVEL UP your male characters?
06:51 Mistake 4: same emotional response as a woman
09:31 Mistake 5: never letting him be vulnerable
11:18 Mistake 6: overly descriptive observations
12:15 Mistake 7: making the "group of guys" too heartfelt
13:55 Live Training: Writing The Opposite Gender EFFORTLESSLY
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