Critique of Sun Rays and Mountains in an Individual's Acrylic Painting- Personal Evaluation

Request by an individual to help resolve painting sun rays on this sunset painting.
April 7, 2020 was the first 'Paint Along Tuesdays' LIVE, step-by-step acrylic art lesson by Lynne Looney. It was in response to the Covid Nationwide Lockdown. Ms Looney's workshops and classes were cancelled and no one knew how long the isolation would last. Initially for her regular students she decided to paint LIVE on her Facebook ProPage 'Lynne Looney Studios' to continue her teaching and boost morale. A year later and over 50 video lessons, the popular weekly sessions continue every Tuesday morning at 10am Central Standard Time LIVE. It allows participants to ask questions and interact with Lynne as she produces a step-by-step painting from start to finish.
In this short critique, Ms. Looney evaulates a painting by one of the artists who participated in her private acrylic painting sessions.. After printing out a download of the student's painting, she set it beside the painting reference and proceeded to point out some subtle adjustments the student could implement to strengthen the piece.

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