【LUMi】Immortal Jellyfish 【VOCALOID original song】+ VSQx

3rd ANNIVERSARY REMAKE    • 【LUMi】Immortal Jellyfish —3rd anniversary ...  

Headphones recommended? My mixing is crap.

THIS SONG IS BASICALLY GOOD UNTIL SHE STARTS SINGING.

It might not have won the contest but I worked really hard on it and I want to share. It's not the best but I hope it's not too bad...
The video editing software was crap and really annoying, I really need to get a better one... All the quality just disappeared, I swear it was supposed to be HD.

This song was inspired by LUMi's concept and the idea of a Jellyfish that can recover by going back to it's younger form. It is also something I can relate to on some level so it was a very good experience to write this.
Also, I even had somebody help me with the "circles" phonetics but I messed it up anyway and she can't say "circles" now.

Lyrics, music and art all by me! This is my third original song but is the first one I'm ever uploading. I really hope to improve in the future. Any feedback is appreciated.

Song Download: https://mega.nz/#!WUhBmITQ!sZiRpDtlce...

VSQx + Instrumental download: https://mega.nz/#!aUo3VBza!9YTpGjkFBp...

Lyrics:

How long has it been this way?
I cannot tell.
But if I could speak under water,
I'd tell them all your secrets.
How long has the Sun ignored the Night and Moon?
But well it does not really matter,
I cannot change the way Gods think.

I'll be reborn,
I will transform myself back to the way I was.
I'll be reborn,
And I will never move on...

I am the Immortal Jellyfish,
I always return to the way things were.
I am the Immortal Jellyfish
In circles, in circles I go.

I always try so hard but I
can't change myself.
Every time my mind is recycled
to fall for you again.
Even if I leave I'll be
back in your arms.
It's only the matter of time
Until you capture me again.

I'll be reborn,
I will go back to thinking that you were never there.
I'll be reborn,
But pain will always return...

I am the Immortal Jellyfish,
Whenever I'm hurt I turn back my clock.
I an the Immortal Jellyfish,
I cannot escape destiny...

(I am the Immortal Jellyfish x2)
(In circles, in circles I go)

I am the Immortal Jellyfish,
I always return to the way things were.
I am the Immortal Jellyfish
In circles, in circles I go.
I an the Immortal Jellyfish,
I cannot escape destiny...