Be The

Using Digital Monster’s beat from Network V2 Challenge.
I’m looking to improve— my writing, content, delivery, beat selection, everything— so any feedback is dearly appreciated. Additionally, I am looking for some peers with whom to consistently exchange ideas and discuss each other’s work; if you are interested, let me know!

Lyrics
We in a world where profits speak loudest,
But to understand that, you have to think about it,
Which I doubt you will, this was just a drill,
You rather get your fill on YouTube shorts
Tiktok drops from thots sportsstars pols or dorks
Content don’t matter, just delay feeling sadder
You can laugh through disaster while your masters get fatter.
Deep thoughts are worthless, so they kept below the surface,
We skipping rocks across the top of our own conscious
Everyone just seeking a license to be thoughtless
When I talk don't respond, please, don't be honest.
Play my candy crush, [let me] read my comics.
Wander through the world, my head inside a condom
Bang my head so hard can't hear if I'm the problem.
Got my Gandhi poster up, and I’ve posted The Solution,
Now I’m scrolling through my feed, awaiting revolution.

Fitting that the final dope epidemic’s dopamine.
We all dope fiends, but like it's kinda dope I mean,
We all like in this dope scene together, and it's kinda cool
if like, you feel me or you know what I mean?

I got a plan for you, you got a plan for me.
We can cha-ange the world, if you just follow me.
This is the way to go, you just don't see it though.
Wandering to and fro, blue states and red states both,
Paint blatant purple thrones, royal boots on our throats
Stars explode round my eyes, [I] finally realize...

Fitting that the final dope epidemic’s dopamine.
We all dope fiends, but like it's kinda dope I mean,
We all like in this dope scene together, and it's kinda cool
if like, you feel me or you know what I mean?