Editing YOUR Writing pt. 1 | Line Edit With Me #4

Thank you once again to the writers who submitted their wonderful work! Watch part 2 here:    • Editing YOUR Writing pt. 2 | Line Edit Wit...  

TIMESTAMPS:
3:42 - Submission 1 - establishing a sense of place, chronology
10:36 - Submission 2 - continuity, imagery
16:09 - Submission 3 - POV, psychic distance, cohesion
22:14 - Submission 4 - opening lines
26:38 - Submission 5 - sentence structure
30:56 - Submission 6 - clarity of image
34:11 - Submission 7 (poem) - line breaks, double meanings
43:01 - Submission 8 - clarity of concept

LINKS
Writing updates: https://bit.ly/3fOsIAf
Blog:   / coffeeandcalligraphy  
Twitter (private):   / rachellwrites  
Pinterest: http://bit.ly/2qdKsyM

Want to read excerpts from my books?
Moth Work intro page & writing updates: https://bit.ly/3k31Puu
Feeding Habits intro page & writing updates: https://bit.ly/31kBnE7

MY WORK
→ "The Species is Dead" in Minola Review (short fiction): https://bit.ly/2WVNuXw
→ "Mama Lives in My Mouth" in Young Voices (flash fiction): https://bit.ly/3m60yDk
→ "Primary Organs" in The Malahat Review (short fiction - fc. Winter 2020)
→ "We sell skin on sale" in Augur Magazine (poetry - fc. Winter 2020)
→ "My Wolf Lives on the Windowsill" in Grain Magazine (poetry): [print only]

ABOUT ME
Hi y'all! I'm Rachel, a nineteen-year-old writer from Toronto. I've been writing for six years and am in my second year as a writing undergrad. On my channel, I document my writing journey and try to post once a week (usually on Fridays). You can read my work in issue 25 of Minola Review, Grain Magazine, The Malahat Review (fc. Winter 2020), Augur Magazine (fc. Winter 2020), on my blog, and elsewhere!

ASK ME ANYTHING: http://bit.ly/2q00dJv

Outro: This is not a joke by Monplaisir

My equipment:
→ Vlog camera: iPhone 8
→ Fancy camera: Sony ZV1
→ Vlog mic: Rode Video Micro
→ Sit-down mic: Blue Snowball iCE
→ Editor: Premiere Pro

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